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Crafting Novels and Short Stories: Everything You Need to Know to Write Great Fiction

In an old Eastbourne bookshop © by Elsie esq.

I don’t know much about this one. I only skimmed it after downloading it for free. It appears to have a lot of good content in it, so if you have a Kindle, download it while it still is free!

From the Amazon description:

Inside you’ll find the tools you need to build strong characters, keep your plots moving, master the art of dialogue, choose the right point of view, and more.

This comprehensive book on the art of novel and short story writing is packed with advice and instruction from best-selling authors and writing experts like Nancy Kress, Elizabeth Sims, Hallie Ephron, N.M. Kelby, Heather Sellers, and Donald Maass, plus a foreword by James Scott Bell. You’ll learn invaluable skills for mastering every area of the craft:

  •     Define and refine your characters.
  •     Make your plot and conflict high-energy and intense.
  •     Hone your story’s point of view.
  •     Create a rich setting and backstory.
  •     Craft dialogue that rings true.
  •     Select the right words and descriptions throughout your story.
  •     Revise your story to perfection.

 

Normally this book sells for $19.99. I don’t know how long this will be free, so download it now! Knowledge is power, but free knowledge is even better! So add a new book to your “pile” of writing books today!

 

 

Here are your Provocative Phrases (writing prompts) for Friday, April 27, 2012:

Who

  • Who’s the boss?
  • Everyone I’ve asked has…
  • That doesn’t make sense to me…
  • All I do is…
  • Is there a choice?
  • You haven’t got a…
  • We’ve got good news…
  • At four o’clock my kid will be at…
  • Now she could…
  • This is how I…
  • Not bad, eh?
  • Please don’t get me wrong…
  • Do you deserve…

 

Check out this great book on generating writing ideas for any kind of project written by my friend Jack Heffron. It is a free download for your Kindle today, so save yourself  $19.99 and get it now! I don’t know how long this will last!

Free sign © by khawkins04

The Writer’s Idea Book 10th Anniversary Edition: How to Develop Great Ideas for Fiction, Nonfiction, Poetry, and Screenplays: Jack Heffron: Amazon.com: Kindle Store.

 

 

This is a repost of a review that I posted a little over a year ago on Grist for the Muse.  This is a great book that I’ve recommended to several of my writing friends lately and filled with topics I want to discuss in more detail soon on this blog.

The War of Art: Break Through the Blocks and Win Your Inner Creative Battles – Steven Pressfield

This book is one of the best books I have EVER read on the nature of struggle in the creative process. In short, this book will provide me material to write numerous blog entries.

First of all, I love, love, LOVE the title.  The clever play on words caught my attention… I mean come on The Art of War… The War of Art? Great stuff.  The book is arranged into three sections: Resistance, Battling Resistance and Beyond Resistance. Within these sections are brief one to three-page essays about the aspects of the Resistance that dwells within every writer and most of the rest of the world. Short, direct writing illustrates each point.

This book does something that has never been done before… at least in my mind it hasn’t, which is that it defines the true essence of the Inner Critic.  If you are not familiar with this name you’ve experienced it: That nagging voice in the crevices of your mind who whispers doubts in your ear when you sit down to confront the blank page. It says things such as:  “This is stupid. Why are you wasting your time? Who do you think you are? Why would anyone want to read this sh!@.” And on and on. Natalie Goldberg calls this “Monkey Mind.” Others call it writer’s block. Still others call it “untapped potential.”  Regardless of what name you give it, it is the essence of Resistance.

Pressfield pulls no punches when writing about Resistance.  It is the enemy.  And you are at WAR. (Hence the substance behind the clever title for the book.)

Resistance will unfailingly point to true North—meaning that calling or action it most wants to stop us from doing… Rule of thumb: The more important a call or action is to out soul’s evolution, the more Resistance we will feel toward pursuing it.” p12

I’ve highlighted quotes on almost every page of this book.  All excellent insights and all worthy of exploration. This book is required reading for anyone who wants to write, paint, start a business, lose weight, or commit yourself to a life of service to others. Anyone who has:

“experienced a vision of the person you might become, the work that you could accomplish, the realized being you were meant to be.”

I think that this covers everyone on the planet. The message of this book is universal: Resistance is a cunning and ruthless enemy who does not give up ground easily.

Case and point:  I read this book for the first time almost a YEAR ago. I loved it so much that I felt that I needed to read it again, so I started rereading it on Monday.  I even had a first draft of this post written on 4/27/2010, but failed to finish it up until now. Relaunching the blog was in my mind for the last 2 years, but again and again I discovered new excuses why I couldn’t begin: Kristen’s grad school work load is busy and I need to help out more with the laundry and cooking; I need to read up on blog design since I can’t format the text correctly; Overtime spent on urgent projects at work eat into my free time; There is so much in this book I don’t even know where to begin (so it is easier not to start at all).

Resistance is real, and it kills the creative spirit or any urge to reach for something that makes you better. The War of Art helps you “know thy enemy” and how you must fight it.  Don’t allow Resistance prevent you from reading this book. Get a copy today.

Stay tuned for future Musings on this book. There is a lot to explore and discuss here.

Here are your Provocative Writing Prompts for Friday, April 6th, 2012:

oh my god © by gematrium

  • Oh my God…
  • They want to make sure…
  • I thought you might like to know…
  • Who can blame him?
  • That sounds about right…
  • I’ll be old(and possibly dead) before…
  • I was hesitant to…
  • I suspect that…
  • But if you start…
  • I don’t know…
  • I couldn’t believe it!

 

Make Money

I often hear writers say that they write as an artistic expression, not for money. Usually this occurs when an editor or agent suggests that he/she make a few changes to the novel in order to make it saleable. Writing as art is bullshit. No one writes so that their perfect, artistic prose can be sealed away in a fireproof vault only to be discovered centuries later when futuristic hover-backhoes stumble upon it while digging a new sewer line for nuclear waste.

Writing is for an audience. Writing is meant to be read. So don’t hide behind the excuse that someone will steal your idea (they won’t, they all think their ideas are much better) or that the masses just won’t understand you (they will), or that your words are too valuable to be besmirched by being read by a refinery worker in Galveston, Texas with an 8th grade education and a drinking problem (they aren’t.. and paper is cheap.. Have you seen that sale on paper going on at OfficeMax this week?)

Money © by 401K

You write for money. You secretly wish that the handwritten manuscript stuffed in that cardboard box under your bed will become the next Harry Potter series, or the next Da Vinci Code or Bridges of Madison County (yuk) and make you rusty green dumptster-fuls of cash that you can then spend for a Scottish castle next door to the legendary, one-named rock icon: Sting.

You write in the hopes of being able to one day quit your job at the bread factory, the Fortune 500 financial services company, the Federal Department of Cowland Security, and live off of the royalties generated by your mighty backlist of books. You write in order to make sure that you can keep your 70 cats in kibble and kitty litter for one more month.

Don’t get me wrong. Writers gotta write for the love of writing. You gotta love something that would make the most jaded accountants weep when they attempt to calculate your hourly rate. (Take total amount of cash earned from your writing and divide it into the number of hours spent writing, re-writing, searching for an agent or finding a client, waiting for rejections, then rewriting the novel once again upon the request of an agent…)  In other words, don’t calculate your hourly wage with any sharp objects nearby… or blunt objects… Just push this thought out of your head for now and forever. Trust me it’s better that way.

You have to LOVE writing to subject yourself to endless inquiries about when you are going to get a real job bagging groceries at the Piggly Wiggly, face off with internet trolls who target you because the picture on your Twitter profile makes you look particularly handsome/beautiful and they are jealous, and suffer through the weird old guy who wants you to read his vanity pressed 700 page opus that smells like cat piss from sitting on a pallet of identical books in his garage too long.

You write because you love it and there is nothing that you’d rather do with your free-time. You do it because it is exciting and pushes you to your creative limits. But make no mistake about it: You write to be read. You write to make money.

And that is what this blog is all about: Writing fast and making bucket-loads of cash to get you by one more week… to allow you to feed your addiction just a little while longer; until the phone rings with your next paying commercial writing project, the next acceptance letter with a modest check arrives, or that email appears in your in-box complimenting you on your work and how it made that reader’s life better in some small way.

So get back to work. Write fast and make money.

If you missed part 1 of this updated manifesto, check it out here: Updated Flash Writing Manifesto – Part 1: Write Fast

 

Why did I change the tagline for this blog to: Write Fast. Make Money?  The reason is simple. Let me quote the words of the immortal Samuel Johnson:

“No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money.”

And it’s truer now than it was even back then.

Write fast

This part of it is simple. If we are lucky we have 80 years of life on this blue marble in the middle of a vast universe. Time is the most precious asset that we have. It is the only thing that we are guaranteed to have a limited amount of, and we don’t know exactly when that time’s going to run out. We humans tend to squander our time on silly, meaningless pursuits, such as dead-end jobs that leech the creativity from our brains, unhealthy relationships, and endless hours playing Call of Duty or World of Warcraft, or wondering if the world is going to end on Snooki’s due date.

Writers feel the passage of time more acutely than the average person. We want to write. We seek the perfect time to do it. We feel guilty if we don’t get around to it. We make up endless excuses not to do it. (I include myself in this category.) For example: I need to take just one more online writing class about discovering the ancient family history of my historical romance heroine… I need to get an agent lined up for this supernova of brilliance that I’m about to unleash upon the world, but once I get started, the explosion of creative energy will wipe out everyone and everything around me because it can’t be contained… You get the idea. We’re all delusional.

Writing © by Ed Yourdon

On average, writers spend more time thinking about writing, talking about writing and reading about writing than they do on the act itself. They agonize over bad reviews both real and imagined. They scrub the grout between every tile in the master bathroom because they can’t imagine putting a pen to paper with dirty grout near the crapper. Writers waste valuable time seeking that nirvana-esque-perfect-time-to-write.

And let’s not forget listening to the bad advice of parents: What are you going to do with a degree in creative writing? Shouldn’t you study something practical like Chemical Engineering? Lovers: What are you wasting your time typing for? Now go make me a turkey pot-pie. Friends: Come on, man, you don’t want to waste your time with your laptop when you can hang out with us at the monster truck rally. And last, but not least, that inner voice in your head that NEVER shuts up. That voice that constantly questions your sanity, your grammatical acumen, the strength of your ideas, and your very virility (or fertility).

This is where the Write Fast part and the flash writing technique come into play. Writing fast is a way to trick your brain and inner critic into letting you get started. It helps you stop procrastinating and get something written in a non-threatening way.

Tune in tomorrow for the REAL reason you are reading this blog: Part 2 – Make Money.

 

 

Winning has been all over the media the last couple of weeks. With the NCAA Championship Game last night on TV, and the biggest Mega Millions jackpot in history last Friday, all of the hype and focus is on “winning the big one.”

loser © by Joelk75

This brings up a lot of topics to consider as a writer. Competition is a basic form of conflict in fiction and in life. Everything we do is based on a test score. We take our very first tests at one and five minutes after our birth: the APGAR test, and it never stops from there. We are constantly tested, evaluated and scored throughout our lives. And the anxiety and turmoil that this causes is never ending fodder for the Muse.

So here are a few writing topics to consider based on the theme of competition:

  • Write about the times when you’ve felt like a winner.
  • Are you a good sport or a sore loser when you compete? Why?
  • Cheating — Why do people do it? Why does it matter?
  • Greed — A woman involved in a work lottery pool claims that she bought a winning ticket separately from the group and she has no plans to share the prize with her co-workers. This seems to happen quite often. Why is it so hard to share good fortune?
  • After the University of Kentucky won the NCAA Championship, there were huge riots in Lexington. Where over 40 fires were set and several people were injured, including a man who was shot. This also happens quite often. Why do you think riots happen after huge sports victories?
  • Pressure – Some people “choke” while others “thrive” under it. Write about a character who is under a lot of pressure. Show it through his/her actions and dialog. Or write about a time you were under a great deal of pressure.
  • Underdogs – Everyone loves a good underdog story. Whether it is Rocky or Rudy or the 1980 USA Olympic Hockey Team, we have a deep love of the one who doesn’t have much of a chance of winning or making the team. Write about an underdog you know.
  • Who or what brings out your competitive side? Why does it do this?
  • What would you do if you were a winner of the Mega-Millions jackpot?
  • How do you feel about the philosophy of “survival of the fittest?”
  • Write about taking tests.
  • Write about a time when you felt like a loser.

 

Here are your provocative phrases for Friday, March 30th, 2012:

OUT OF CONTROL © by yenney?

  • She was out of control…
  • Do you have a record of…
  • What a difference a month makes…
  • He won’t return anything.
  • I’d like to hear…
  • What wasn’t wanted…
  • All of this has led to…
  • You have no idea…
  • We’re drawn to…
  • Do you feel bad that…
  • You’re okay in our book…
  • Waste can be…

 

This week’s Topic Tuesday launches this weekly feature on the Flash Writing site. This one is a reprint from Grist for the Muse from 6/21/2011, and shamelessly capitalizing on the release of the blockbuster film based on the best-selling book.

The hunger games by suzanne collins free giveaway © by GoodNCrazy

Suzanne Collins’ book, The Hunger Games has enthralled audiences of all ages (myself included) and is a textbook example of how to write popular fiction.  This week I’m going to list writing topics inspired by the book:

WARNING: These topics contain some minor spoilers about the book.

  • Hunger — When was the last time that you felt gnawing hunger? How did it change your mindset? How do much do you think that it impacted the personalities of the characters in the story? Write about hunger.
  • Competition — Competition and games have been part of humanity since almost the beginning of time. We have entire TV networks devoted to games. Can you see something like the Hunger Games emerging once again in the world?
  • Trust — Surviving the Hunger Games involves a great deal of paranoia on the part of Katniss.  She is always questioning who she can trust, and how much she can trust them. Write about trust.  Why is it so important?  What is life like without it?
  • Hunting — Have you ever hunted?  What was it like? How did you feel?
  • Sacrifice — Katniss volunteers to take the place of Prim during the Reaping with the knowledge that she will die as a result of this sacrifice.  Sacrifice makes no sense for self-preservation, but you hear about incidences of it all of the time.  What things are you willing to sacrifice your life for?
  • The Games — How well do you think you’d fare in the games?  Could you kill with the knowledge that others would kill you?  Could you kill in cold blood?  Betray an alliance?
  • Big Brother — In the arena, the contestants know that there are cameras on them at all times.  This awareness impacts the characters actions, including the creation of a “fake” romanace between Katniss and Peeta.  There are more and more cameras out there in the world, watching us everywhere. How do you feel about this? How do you think this impacts our behavior?